Ariel K. Moniz (she/her) is a queer Black poetess and…
The Pantoum is a poetry form that relies heavily on repitition and the use of quatrains, which are stanzas comprised of four lines1. This form allows for a poem of any length, often with the first line and the last line of the poem being the same. Each quatrain follows a pattern in which the second and fourth lines of one stanza become the first and third lines of the following stanza. Each line generally consists of eight to twelve syllables2.
This use of repetition creates a rhythm and echo within the piece, which has led this form to became popular in expressions referring to a past time. Some pantoums also follow an abab rhyme scheme, though many do not. It is also common to shift meaning and inflection within the repeated lines, sometimes changing the structure of the line to do so.
The pantoum originated as a Malaysian form of oral poetry, referred to as a pantun, which would be recited or sung. This likely influenced the form’s well-known use of continuous repetition. In the 15th century the form became a written tradition as well, and in the 19th century the pantoum found favor among Western writers.
Some wonderful examples of pantoums can be found below:
Nocturne by Sadakichi Hartmann
Iva’s Pantoum by Marilyn Hacker
Descent of the Composer by Airea D. Matthews
Ariel K. Moniz (she/her) is a queer Black poetess and Hawaii local currently living abroad. She is a co-founder of The Hyacinth Review, and serves as a poetry reader for The Lumiere Review as well as the social media manager for Liminal Transit Review. She is the winner of the 2016 Droste Poetry Award and a Best of the Net nominee. Her writing has found homes with Blood Bath Literary Zine, Sledgehammer Literary Journal, Black Cat Magazine, and Sunday Mornings at the River Press, among others. She holds a B.A in English from the University of Hawaii at Hilo, where she once served as the editor-in-chief of Kanilehua Art & Literary Magazine. You can find her on her website at kissoftheseventhstar.home.blog, on Twitter @kissthe7thstar, on Instagram @kiss.of.the.seventh.star, or staring out to sea.